Many people believe that social networking sites (such as facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and Dd To what extent do you agree?

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extend
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I think that
internet
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allows us to remain in touch with loved ones when we are far from them.
Firstly
,in
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look
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of
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greener
pastures
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many
people
are
traveling
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in
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different countries , leaving their families behind so
internet
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allows them to feel close to their families.
Secondly
business
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businesses
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are now using
internet
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more often through zoom
meeting's
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,where 50
people
or more can be in one meeting without congesting the room .It
also
help
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in reducing the spread of covid 19.
In
addition
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people
can
also
work from home , advertising
they
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products there which
also
reduces business rentals expense.
Furthermore
learning for everyone has been made easy .
Also
if you want to travel you can view the place you would like to visit before you make any payment.
However
to a lesser extent the
internet
can be hazardous to our children .They can interact with criminals pretending to be good
people
,
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since you can only relay
with
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the information that the person you talking with gives you without knowing them personally.
Also
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people
can be bullied there,
scammed
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and scammed
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when making payments .
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addition
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family time will be consumed by it since everyone will be glued to their phones or laptops.
Therefore
the
internet
is a good way of communicating when used wisely .
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