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Many parents give jobs to their children to do around the house in order to develop their characters and self-sufficiency

#parents #jobs #children #house #characters #self-sufficiency
Teaching
to
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the children how to be auto-sufficiency and care
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for theirself
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theirself
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themselves
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 are two
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crucial
critical
 works in
term
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 of
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responsibilities
responsabilities
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the responsabilities
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 of the parents. In childhood,
people
 need to learn about life from their father and mother and in some
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 from their
legals
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legal
 tutors. In my opinion, having obligations at home is a useful way to improve the children's
behavior
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. Since you are around twelve years old, your parents
giving
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 you jobs
such
 as washing dishes or taking out the
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rubbish
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rubish
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 because they are teaching you about effort and the value of
the
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things.
This
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 jobs are
necesary
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necessary
 to become an
aduld
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adult
 good person in the future. With
this
types
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 of job in your house, when you are young, you will be a better adult person. Education about knowledge like maths or science
are
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 relevant on the one side of the life, but young
people
 need to learn
others aspect
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 for the mood you will be able to live. I can mention one example in
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 context: Autism
people
.
This
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people
 usually and are
succces
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success
 in their schools but their
unhability
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inability
ability
 to do simple things at home could be a hard problem for their way to
live
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. Their parents should help
they
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 to improve their abilities to be
self-sufficiency
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 and be able to care
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theirself
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. In conclusion, I think
that is
 important
doing
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this
 type of
jobs
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job
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 at home during childhood to help young
people
 to improve their qualities and abilities for their future. Education
need
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 both sides of the coin to be efficient and to catch the best future in the life of the
people
.
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