You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Austalia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter * explain why think you would be suitable for the job * say what else you could do for the family * give your reasons for wanting the job

#advertisement #couple #austalia #someone #two #children #language #year #job

Dear Madam, I am writing

this

letter to show my keen interest in the advert about the requirement for a tutor to teach my native language to your heir. I was looking for

this

kind of job for a very long period as I am in great need of work due to my family's financial issues. So, I am in dire need of a permanent vacancy through which I can easily handle my household tasks. There are enormous factors which made me suitable for

this

post yet among them one of the foremost is my teaching experience of more than 10 years.

Moreover

, My class is not old-school strict nor is the teacher-centred which benefits children to gain more without hesitation and any kind of trouble.

Furthermore

, I can

also

provide a facility to teach your offspring from your home through virtual mode in case of any requirement.

Therefore

, Due to the aforesaid qualities, I find myself in a good position for getting a chance to teach your children. Hope to get a positive reply from your side. Thanks. Yours Faithfully, Kuljeet Kaur.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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