You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Austalia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter * explain why think you would be suitable for the job * say what else you could do for the family * give your reasons for wanting the job

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Dear Madam, I am writing
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letter to show my keen interest in the advert about the requirement for a tutor to teach my native language to your heir. I was looking for
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kind of job for a very long period as I am in great need of work due to my family's financial issues. So, I am in dire need of a permanent vacancy through which I can easily handle my household tasks. There are enormous factors which made me suitable for
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post yet among them one of the foremost is my teaching experience of more than 10 years.
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, My class is not old-school strict nor is the teacher-centred which benefits children to gain more without hesitation and any kind of trouble.
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, I can
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provide a facility to teach your offspring from your home through virtual mode in case of any requirement.
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, Due to the aforesaid qualities, I find myself in a good position for getting a chance to teach your children. Hope to get a positive reply from your side. Thanks. Yours Faithfully, Kuljeet Kaur.
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