International events like the football World Cup other international sports occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, many
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not the same perspective
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cause tensions between the
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can reduce the tensions between
countries
. In the following paragraphs, my point of
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that
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announce
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • international tensions
  • patriotic emotions
  • safe way
  • bring people together
  • friendly competition
  • peaceful interactions
  • express national pride
  • improve diplomatic relations
  • mutual understanding
  • cooperation
  • extreme national pride
  • aggression
  • violence
  • strike a balance
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