You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

Dear xxx How are you? Hope you and your family members are doing very well. It was a long time since I haven’t heard anything from you and
then
I got your letter for advice on whether to go to college or try a
job
.I will be more than happy in guiding you , as per me a
job
is good for you , which has some reasons to it. As you have just completed school, getting to college without any kind of long break from studies will lead to a sense of boredom in your life.
On the other hand
, If you will join a
Job
instead
, It will provide you with a taste of the real working world in which you have to survive even after passing the college and In turn, if you found that it is not your piece of cake you can switch to a new line in the early stages of life.
Moreover
, As you have a dream of becoming an accountant like your uncle, you can start a
job
, either a part-time or a full time one , in
this
field only with the introductory knowledge that you have taken from your school .
This
will help you in your
further
studies and in getting you some experience. If you still have doubts , we can meet any time , always available for you. Yours Abc
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Real-world experience
  • Practical experience
  • Financial independence
  • On-the-job training
  • Student loan debt
  • Personal growth
  • Professional networking
  • Career development
  • Skilled workers
  • Job market
  • Career goals
  • Immediate income
  • Professional relationships
  • Market demand
  • Defining interests
  • Educational investments
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