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Do you support that the nuclear technology should be used for constructive purposes? Use your own knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence. Give reasons for your viewpoint.

With the ever-increasing demands for cleaner
energy
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, whether nuclear technology should be used for constructive purposes has become a topic of widespread debate. There are counter-arguments on both sides of
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 issue, which I will now discuss. On the one hand, supporters of nuclear
energy
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 argue that it can bring significant benefits to humans. They claim that it is a better alternative to
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energy
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the energy
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 that comes from fossil fuels
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 as coal and natural gas. They emphasise that nuclear
energy
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power
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 plants produce relatively
less
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 amounts of carbon emissions than other
power
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 plants, and
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 are less polluting than fossil fuels.
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, it is often said that nuclear
power
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 is more reliable and less costly. Due to the economic advantages, many countries around the world,
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 large nations
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 as the US and China, continue to use nuclear technology to expand their
energy
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 resources. Opponents of nuclear
energy
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,
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, believe that the cost of nuclear
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 is much higher once people's lives and the environment are factored in, and I agree. A striking example would be Japan’s nuclear disaster in 2011, which was triggered by a massive earthquake and tsunami.
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 nuclear emergency was beyond the reach of the Japanese government.
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, the leakage devastated the environment and caused the loss of significant numbers of homes and lives. Even worse, it would
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 cause hazards for generations to come.
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, we should be aware that nuclear
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 is a time bomb for
explosion
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the explosion
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, and a nuclear catastrophe could have irreversible consequences for people and ecosystems. To conclude, life and the environment are priceless and should not be put at risk to make nuclear
power
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. If governments take proactive actions in
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 and development of renewable
energy
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, I firmly believe that it is possible to replace nuclear
power
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 plants with other safer solutions.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • energy
  • power
  • safe
  • risk
  • control
  • rule
  • policy
  • country
  • people
  • future
  • waste
  • store
  • reactor
  • fuel
  • medicine
  • image
  • scan
  • cancer
  • treat
  • fact
  • example
  • data
  • idea
  • point
  • benefit
  • harm
  • climate
  • change
  • cost
  • job
  • money
  • plan
  • study
  • science
  • proof
  • trust
  • world
  • safety
  • danger
  • environment
  • cooperation
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