In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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In some countries ,governments are in our
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industries
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and
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to more to the spatial pleases which is from people life .
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,it may bring some drawbacks as well. The important
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is that big
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will be without air pollution If the factories move spacial areas and
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produce too much smoke so If these factories
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outside of
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smoke will not enter the
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.The reason is that air pollution is one of
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problems in modern big societies .The governments can solve
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is that traffic jams can be less than before with
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vehicles will have
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commuting so people can save time when there is no traffic jam .
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method can have a lot of benefits for
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as saving money.
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spacial arias which have many facilities need
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much cost for
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.They have to pay too much money for
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plan and it may
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their business. Another negative point is that
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will be too
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far from big
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so they have to spend
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transforming.
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they need to have more vehicles and staff. To sum up,there can be a lot of
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in moving
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and
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in spacial arises which is far from big
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belie sky without air pollution .while it has many disadvantages
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as spending much time for transferring and having more vehicles and
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staff
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