you live in a room in college which you share with another student. however, there are many problems with this arrangements and you find it very difficult to work write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college, in your letter, - describe the situation - explain your problem and why it is difficult to work - say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to draw your attention to the problems faced by me in room number 27 which is in the B block of William Harry College.
To describe the bad situation of my stay at
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in
this
room, first
of all, the behaviour of Mr.
John, my roommate, is unbearable. Because of his angry nature, he is always ready to fight Change the punctuation
Mr
on
unnecessary things. In fact, he is least interested Change preposition
against
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in
into
the cleanliness of the room and the bad condition of the washroom is beyond words. All these things are making my stay here identical to a herculean task and I cannot anticipate Correct your spelling
in to
the
good level of my health if I stay for a longer time here.
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a
Lastly
, I would like to relocate myself
to a new place and I would like to submit some of my preferences. Primarily, I do not want to share my new place with anyone so that I can find my mental peace. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Moreover
, it will be really a great relief for me if my new place has no children or school nearby and especially the landlord should be a calm and happy person and rent cost should be between $1200 to $1300.
Look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Harry BrownSubmitted by Mrjit147 on
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