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Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible

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The development of technology has changed a lot of learning methods for children. In my opinion, I think
this
 change had both negative and positive sides.
First
, let's talk about the negative side.Many school and
education
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 has changed their face-to-face class to
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zoom meeting methods
under
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 the COVID-19 period.School
time
nomarlly
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normally
 started
at
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 the morning around 8am
,
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 and finished
at
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 the afternoon.
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 means the
students
 had to look at the computer
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 to 7-8 hours a day.
However
, it will hurt their eyes and bodies , if they do not have enough rest and
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correct
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setting
seating
sitting
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of
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students
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 even have to attempt the class on the bed if there
are
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 not enough space at home for doing the online meetings.
Secondly
, is
the
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 positive way.In many developed countries, the best
education
 resources always go to the richer families, but
the
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online classes usually cost a lower price.In
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, low-income families can afford the children to attempt more classes, it may help
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the student
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student
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students
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 to get
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better results in school ,
also
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and also
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 a chance to get
better
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education
.
On the other hand
, online classes help
tp
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 saved a lot of
time
 for both teachers and
students
, questions and problems can be solved through the online meetings.
As
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a
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conclusion, online learning development
do
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 have a negative way,
such
 as affecting student health and
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 a place limit.But at the same
time
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 it helps to save a lot of
time
 and let the
students
 have a better
education
 chance.
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