Some people say that television is a very useful tool when it comes to education. Others argue that television is a much overused ineffective teacher. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion as to the usefulness of television as an educational tool.

In
this
tech-savvy modern world, the technology is used to publish educational courses on
television
for the children. Some people believe that
television
trainings
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provide better
education
to students;
however
, I feel that interactive
classroom
trainings
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with the faculty have more positive outcomes. In the following paragraphs, I explore both
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views. On the one hand, no one can deny that in-person
classroom
studies are more interactive and organised by an instructor.
First
and foremost, The
classroom
sessions are interactive as it provides
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demand availability of the teacher.
For example
, kids can clarify all their questions right away with the teacher.
In addition
, In
such
education
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model, the instructor
evaluate
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students
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capability and
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their desire while designing assignments and
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curriculum
for them.
Thus
,
this
kind of learnings
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better results as faculty consider different perspectives for syllabus and interactive training
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an opportunity to resolve doubts
immediatly
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immediately
.
On the other hand
, in the current world televisions are available across all homes,
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them for learning
purpose
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purposes
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as they provide
convience
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convenience
and flexibility.
Firstly
, if they have
appropriate
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subscription, they can be accessed from anywhere at
anytime
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.
For instance
, I learned many theory subjects by watching them on
television
.
Secondly
, study materials are available
on demand
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at their
convience
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convenience
,
also
we can use options like pause, rewind, and forward to review or revisit in case of any roadblocks.
Therefore
, televisions are
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innovation for
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mankind they are not only for entertainment but
also
for
education
.
Finally
, to recapitulate, certain people claim
television
is more useful in
education
as they bring
convience
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convenience
and flexibility;
however
in my opinion interactive
classroom
sessions
are require
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to gain expertise in the desired subject.
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