many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. some people however that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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progress

is quite

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important

for making

better

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life.

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, the United Nations has

been

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reported the ranking of many categories of

development

including economy, education and

health

. A lot of governments consider that economic growth is

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mot

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most

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imortant

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important

objective for them. Still, others argue that

another

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other

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types of

progress

are important for a nation. Both ideas have critical

reazons

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reasons

, but it is agreed that

advance

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of other forms

are

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important as well as

an economic ones

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an economic one

economic ones

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.

To begin

with, economic

progress

is

most

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intergral

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integral

part

for

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of

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a country since they can spend money on

imporving

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improving

society.

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, Japan

were

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not rich after

the

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world war 2,

then

they had not enough schools and hospital for citizens

due

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tolacking

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to lacking

lacking

of money.

However

, after making huge economic

progress

with

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the period of

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war, Japan could

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in

imporving

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improving

their

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income,

moreover

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people could consume and live

richely

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richly

.

Therefore

, it makes clear that the

development

economically is most

imortant

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important

for many

govenments

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governments

.

On the other hand

, others believe that other

tyepes

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types

of

improvment

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improvement

are equally crucial for a country. The other types of

progress

including

health

conditions and education

sistems

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systems

can increase

citizen's

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citizens'

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satisfaction

for

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with

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their life.

For instance

, South

africa

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tried to increase the number of hospitals and schools with some NGOs in 1980 which lead to a great result that people feel live more safely with good

health

condiation

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condition

conditions

and

knowleadge

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knowledge

.

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it is

apperant

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apparent

that trying to make

a

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improvent

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improvement

for other types of

progress

is important as well as economic growth. In summary, both economic

progress

and the

development

of other parts like

health

,

education

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and education

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have a large influence on citizens.

However

, the economic growth

tend

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to make a benefit

for

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only

limited

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people

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,

therefore

it is clear that the other parts are equally important since all

of

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citizens

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the citizens

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can get

theri

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their

there

benefits. After thorough

this

discussion, it is predicted that if a government focus on not only the economic

development

,

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but

also

social

improvments

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improvements

, the nation will be changed in

good

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way dramatically.