Only rich people should donate to charity. Do you agree or disagree ?

Donation
for
charity
is no longer an unfamiliar notion to witness in our daily life, the groups of donors are varied, from the low-average
people
to the wealthiest
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.
However
, many
people
claim that it is only the duty of the
people
with more money to donate.
This
essay would give the reasons why
this
statement should never be applied
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our reality. On the one hand, those asserting the idea that only the wealthy should give away money for
charity
may have their reasons as follows.
Firstly
, the gap between the
people
from different social classes could be effectively bridged.
In other words
,
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rich who make their monthly earnings significantly higher than the average salaries, if they donate, the general income would be more consistent,
thus
the gap between the poor and rich would be mitigated.
Secondly
, the money received from the affluent
people
would be more considerable than that of the poor,
thereafter
their cash
donation
would support the
charity
in almost every aspect from food to clothes, from medicine to education.
On the other hand
,
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should not be limited in terms of the property like the financial resource, and the donors should not be constrained by their earnings since
donation
itself stems from empathy. In a world where only rich
people
are the only group who support the
charity
, the society would
then
only exalt the propertied contribution in the name of the rich, and despise the help from the average-earned
people
;
as a result
, the notion of ‘
donation
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negatively. Not to mention that
this
statement would impose unnecessary pressure on the affluent.
Although
the choice of whether to donate or not depends on one’s decision, the
people
from the higher class of the society will receive
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if they do not donate provided
this
notion exists. In conclusion, no matter why there are several
people
who insist on the statement that only the
people
who have lucrative jobs should make donations to
charity
, I strongly believe that
this
idea is of no benefit and it is not anyone’s responsibility to assist the
people
in poor condition.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • philanthropy
  • broader spectrum
  • mutual aid
  • affluent
  • foundations
  • oversimplifies
  • multifaceted
  • socioeconomic
  • inclusive
  • democratizing donations
  • online fundraising platforms
  • social media campaigns
  • micro-donations
  • driving social change
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