Some people believe that it is important to spend money on family celebrations such as weddings and birthdays, while others think this is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Views often differ on how to preserve within-family connections for good. Whereas expensive

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essential, I am of the notion that

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to be spent on family celebrations. The main one will undoubtedly be the once-in-a-while pleasance offered to the members.

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is to say that there is not much family quality time to be squandered,

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accumulating spending on,

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, a close-knit vacation at a 5-star hotel, could already become a source of motivation to keep up anyone’s good work. More importantly, memories with

such

beloved people are of uncomparable preciousness. As a consequence, treasuring them in the most unique way, which is only available with loads of

money

invested in anniversaries, would never be abortive.

On the other hand

, I am personally more prone to the belief that spending

money

on bondings is a total waste for a couple of rationales.

Firstly

, it is of more use to save up for other subsistence fees. Looking at the reality, it is evident that famine, overpopulation,etc are still the concerns of countless households, let alone

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enough

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to spare.

Consequently

, there is no point drastically jumping into

such

expense

then

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oneself in the red. On top of all,

money

has never been the decisive factor. It is love, it is the true affection

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in each and every person’s heart, reminding them of the past and empowering them to overcome whatever is ahead. In conclusion, it is indeed crucial to maintain the

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between family members.

However

, it would still be a more positive scenario

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people aware of the limits and the true values of ‘family’.