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Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace (e.g. at home, when traveling, etc.).

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Nowadays, technology gives us the possibility to
work
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 wherever we want.
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 reality could provoke some advantages and disadvantages.
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 of all, I would like to highlight the role of the evolution of technology. The number of opportunities that it has created is significant.
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, in
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 growth, we can find some negative points. The main disadvantage of teleworking is that you always
work
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 because it is complicated to know how to distribute your
time
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. It would help if you learned to separate the workplace and your home and stop working in your free
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.
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, in my experience, I often don't know when to stop working. Sometimes I travel by bus and spend
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time
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 working with my mobile phone
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 of listening to music or relaxing. In my case, it isn't easy to measure my working
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. Doing your
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 is hard with a poor feeling for your co-workers. In
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 situation, while you are working at home, you are enjoying and doing your job right. On the other side, working out of the office is an excellent solution if you don't have a decent professional atmosphere. Another advantage is you decide where you want to do your task. You can choose to
work
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 on the beach or in another country. In conclusion, there are more advantages than disadvantages because if you can organize an excellent timetable, you will enjoy your
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 and free
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. You must be not dependent on
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 and know "how to
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 to live and not to live to
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."
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