It is important for children to learn the difference between right an dwrong at an eraly age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

It is argued that

children

should be taught at a young age to know the difference between what are the right

things

to do and which bad

behaviors

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should be avoided at any cost

if

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that

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even means to use

punishments

.

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my

opinions

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, I completely agree with

this

idea and delve into

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issue to describe which form of

punishments

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punishment

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should be used by

parents

and

teachers

in order to archive better characteristics for

children

.

Children

have very little

understandings

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understanding

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of the world as they have only lived a few years of

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life. So,

parents

and

teachers

are the only ones who will teach them good manners and

behaviors

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to become

the

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responsible adults in

the

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social life when they become older. They are easy to be taught since they have already interested in everything as those years are the learning years of the human as well as they are likely to rebel against the adults.

Therefore

, if they are not educated enough at an early age, they will have a tendency to do wrong

things

when they become teenagers. By virtue of that, the increasing numbers of delinquents and juveniles around the world

is

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the proof of

this

phenomenon what if

things

are not handled good enough. Because of the aforementioned matters, punishment has

been become

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the

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necessary part of the system for

children

. The most effective way of teaching

children

is rewarding and

punishments

. We can't just only give

punishments

to the young if they did bad

things

but we

also

need to give rewards

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did great

things

.

However

,

punishments

should not be bodily or mentally hurt

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children

because those can give traumas to them.

For example

,

parents

should not spank or yell

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their

children

as

punishments

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instead

of

them

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children

need to put their pocket money

to

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punishment jars every time they did something bad and they get sweets and ice creams as rewards if they did counterparts. As for

teachers

, they can give more home

works

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work

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to students as punishment forms and finish classes early or

giving

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applauses to the ones who are clever. In a nutshell, I pen down saying that it is not

like

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a big deal if adults ignore these factors,

however

,

consequences

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of

this

phenomenon can be greatly

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affected

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effected

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in the future. So,

parents

and

teachers

should try to take these simple ways to shape the futures of

children

.