Government should spend money on elementary school while other people say that it should be spent on high school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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authorities, whether elementary

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or high

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. Different people have different opinions about

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essay will delve deeper into both viewpoints along with my opinion in the conclusion.

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with, there are multifarious reasons why a section of society is in favour of spending money on elementary

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. Primarily, elementary

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build up the base of

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;

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, providing a good staff with appropriate facilities

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learning is essential.

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will make the study more interesting and enjoyable

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pupils.

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, hygiene and health issues are

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major factors which

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to be taken care of especially among very young

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.

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needs the deployment of proper staff and medication which

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requires a lot of investment.

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, special medical vaccinations are provided at elementary

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with the help of government funding in many developing nations to ensure the good health of

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. On the other side, a section of society has raised a concern about allocating an adequate

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for high

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as they believe that

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require

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good infrastructure to provide a good standard of education there.

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of government funds for computerized labs with internet connectivity is necessary to connect the

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with the modern world.

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, in these

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,

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can select sports like cricket, football and hockey which not only require a lot of space but

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funds for sports competitions and adequate equipment. If

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assist

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financially,

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may become the base

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making professional players in the future.

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, there is a need for huge financial aid for high

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governments

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. To conclude, though some people opine that

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should spend funds on elementary

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, others believe

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financial aid should be for high

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. I personally believe that both high and elementary

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contribute to the education system so

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should spend money on both as per their requirement.