Government should spend money on elementary school while other people say that it should be spent on high school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is a debatable topic among many people about where to spend money

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authorities, whether elementary

schools

or high

schools

. Different people have different opinions about

this

notion.

This

essay will delve deeper into both viewpoints along with my opinion in the conclusion.

To begin

with, there are multifarious reasons why a section of society is in favour of spending money on elementary

schools

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. Primarily, elementary

schools

build up the base of

students

;

hence

, providing a good staff with appropriate facilities

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learning is essential.

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will make the study more interesting and enjoyable

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pupils.

In addition

, hygiene and health issues are

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major factors which

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to be taken care of especially among very young

students

.

This

needs the deployment of proper staff and medication which

further

requires a lot of investment.

For example

, special medical vaccinations are provided at elementary

schools

with the help of government funding in many developing nations to ensure the good health of

students

. On the other side, a section of society has raised a concern about allocating an adequate

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for high

schools

as they believe that

such

schools

require

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good infrastructure to provide a good standard of education there.

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of government funds for computerized labs with internet connectivity is necessary to connect the

students

with the modern world.

Moreover

, in these

schools

,

students

can select sports like cricket, football and hockey which not only require a lot of space but

also

funds for sports competitions and adequate equipment. If

governments

assist

such

schools

financially,

this

may become the base

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making professional players in the future.

Hence

, there is a need for huge financial aid for high

schools

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governments

. To conclude, though some people opine that

governments

should spend funds on elementary

schools

, others believe

such

financial aid should be for high

schools

. I personally believe that both high and elementary

schools

contribute to the education system so

governments

should spend money on both as per their requirement.