some people say that in all levels of education ,from primary schools to universities ,too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills, do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued by some that compulsory education and higher education
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and are less practical. I completely
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I will state the reasons for my view. The most compelling reason for holding to my view is that nowadays most method of education is based on teachers and scores. In
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other word, teachers have to teach the lessons during
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one term.
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, students must study and pass their term should take an exam and get the accepted score.
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a lot of students have faith study on night exams and their goal only get the score to pass .
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, when I studied
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university , many of my colleagues did not sleep and reviewed their booklets only for passing
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without understanding. Another reason for my position is that , after graduating , a huge number of students do not have enough practical skills ,due to fact the that a lot of schools and universities do not have suitable laboratories to train the practical parts of any
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, because of setting up
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that
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on theory .
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, while Ahvaz ‘s schools are
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. Its schools do not have a place where to experiment. I would like to close my argument
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some people and I opine that the most
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in school and university are based on
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and are not practical because creating the laboratory in the educational places is so expensive. I recommended the training instituted need to improve their vocational place
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rote memorization
  • practical skills
  • adaptable skills
  • critical thinking
  • balanced approach
  • problem-solving
  • decision-making
  • workforce readiness
  • real-life challenges
  • technological advancements
  • information management
  • creativity hindrance
  • lifelong learning
  • skill development
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