At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Societies are responsible to determine the future of countries. These days, the population of middle-aged reaches at the peaked, which is opposite

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of elderly ones.

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essay will discuss both these standpoints. On the

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hand, there are several opportunities that we will gain from

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of young generations.

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, it may increase the

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productivity as more

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are working.

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, the new innovation might breed as well as the new perspective,

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, a developing country could turn into a developed

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in just

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years.

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a start-up company has been popular these days,

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company mostly is run by a group of fresh graduate students who bring

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in

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digitalized era.

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of them is GO-JEK, a well-known company which creates a huge

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of jobs for unemployment in Indonesia.

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are working means

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amount of income that

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. As an illustration, when all industries are reaching their optimal productivity,

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, they will probably obtain more money and could afford to pay

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the tax.

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tax can be located for improving the facility of countries.

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, The high population of young

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might affect negatively as

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period of time might be full of risks,

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, the authority has a bigger responsibility to direct the residents.

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young group must have multiple skills that help them to compete with others.

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, the authority should

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create more job opportunities.

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, criminal cases will certainly leap because many

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are

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unemployment.

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, recently there was an increasing

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of criminal cases in Indonesia, many robbery cases occurred several nights and when the police arrested the gangster, most of them were in

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. To conclude,

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era of population growth might be the challenging

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as the government has a lot of jobs.

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, when they could educate their society and train their skills,

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, many improvements will definitely happen in the country. Thence, the administration should prepare it well before facing

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period by giving well-educated

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, a free skilled training, and

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it.