Increasing number of students are going to universirt instead of working after high school. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for younh people who do this.

The younger generation nowadays

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to pursue their higher learning at

univerisity

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university

rather than finding a job when they completed their diploma degree.

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essay will examine the benefits and drawbacks of learning at the

university

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. The two main benefits of pursuing higher education

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more academic skills and

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.

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student

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students

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learn a basic skill from their background of

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which they do not have critical knowledge to perform their ability. Attending

university

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allow

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student

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the student

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to choose their favourite subject

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on their quality.

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students

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who are good at

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language can select a teaching subject for their

study

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.

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,

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have a wide range of knowledge

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to their

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history. They can focus on

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real

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and practice

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to enhance their education.

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, pursuing higher learning

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some more drawbacks like the lack of financial support as well as more stressful

works

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, the lack of money is the most common one for high

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students

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.

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Undergraduate

and

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graduate

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school

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are having higher course

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rather than

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the high

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school

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which effect

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some

students

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from the rural area.

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, the

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countryside

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country side

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is

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place where having

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a lot

of lower education people due to their parents can not support their

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for

futher

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further

study

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, so children decided to skip

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school

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and find a work to support their family.

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, being a

university

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student

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seem to have more tasks from the professor. They need to complete more exercises, assignments and

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the presentation within a strict

of

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deadline which

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they can not

affort

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afford

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well. To sum up, there are many good points and

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many bad points of studying at the

university

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which

are

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student

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students

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need to

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for their life. As the result,

students

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may get a

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and better job while others are

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a force

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force

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to skip their

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study

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studies

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with

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for

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different

kind

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of reasons.