You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter - describe a news story in your country - explain why people are interested in it - say how the story personally relates to you

Dear Joey, I hope
this
letter finds you fit and fine. I read your message on Facebook to seek my help
about
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your presentation on my country and I am so glad that you are preparing a presentation on a major
event
of
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my nation. As you asked me to tell you about an important
event
these days in my country, I want to enlighten you about the world’s biggest
yoga
camp
that is
being organized by the government on
20th
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of
this
month. The news of
this
grand
event
is being broadcast by various international news channels
such
as BBC and Skynews.
Moreover
, the number of interested people is increasing day by day because they want to know more about
yoga
and its impact on health and fitness and
also
want to attend
this
biggest
event
of
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my country.
Further
, if the number of people is increased up to 10 million,
this
event
can be registered in the world record book as the biggest
yoga
camp. Being a
yoga
trainer, I am so excited to be
the
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part of
this
event
. In fact, I recently got a letter from
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administration to contribute
in
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this
event
as a teacher which is really a great opportunity for me.
In addition
, I ensure you;
I’ll
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send you all the updates, information and images on
facebook
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that will help you a lot not only to submit a wonderful presentation but
also
you may learn many things from
this
event
. Pay my regards to your parents. With love, Harry
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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