You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter - describe a news story in your country - explain why people are interested in it - say how the story personally relates to you
Dear Joey,
I hope
this
letter finds you fit and fine. I read your message on Facebook to seek my help about
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this
month. The news of this
grand event
is being broadcast by various international news channels such
as BBC and Skynews. Moreover
, the number of interested people is increasing day by day because they want to know more about yoga
and its impact on health and fitness and also
want to attend this
biggest event
of
my country.
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, if the number of people is increased up to 10 million, this
event
can be registered in the world record book as the biggest yoga
camp. Being a yoga
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you may learn many things from this
event
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Pay my regards to your parents.
With love,
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite