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The average standard of people’s health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#people’s #health #future
Health is one of the most important factors in life. It is said that in future, average
people
's life is going to be shorter. I agree with
this
 point. now I will discuss why I agree with
this
 point.
To begin
 with, consuming fast foods on a daily basis contributes seriously to the decline of an individual's health status. nowadays children like the fast-food food like cold drinks, pizza, etc, These kinds of foods are not healthy foodstuff and our body can not digest
such
 eating items. all these foods have a very high percentage of cholesterol which will increase the body's fats and create so many diseases like high BP, heart failure etc. The result is
people
 are prone to diseases related to cardiovascular disorders because of the high salt and high sugar content found in these fast foodstuff products.
In addition
, stress-related disorders
also
 becoming more common nowadays. Everyone is complaining of having stress daily. Individuals who continually experience
such
 kinds of stress in
this
 environment are likely to develop both mental and physical disorders.For ,example if I say someone is overworked in the workplace she/he mostly getting the headaches, like where I am working there very mostly are getting the headaches and stomach issues because the
people
 don't eat healthy bread every day and depend on a fast meal that's why they are facing the health issues in daily life.
Finally
, I very much agree
people
 should eat healthy meals if they are going to eat unhealthy meals their lifetime
also
 going to reduce.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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