The average standard of people’s health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Health is one of the most important factors in life. It is said that in future, average

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's life is going to be shorter. I agree with

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point. now I will discuss why I agree with

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point.

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with, consuming fast foods on a daily basis contributes seriously to the decline of an individual's health status. nowadays children like the fast-food food like cold drinks, pizza, etc, These kinds of foods are not healthy foodstuff and our body can not digest

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eating items. all these foods have a very high percentage of cholesterol which will increase the body's fats and create so many diseases like high BP, heart failure etc. The result is

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are prone to diseases related to cardiovascular disorders because of the high salt and high sugar content found in these fast foodstuff products.

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, stress-related disorders

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becoming more common nowadays. Everyone is complaining of having stress daily. Individuals who continually experience

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kinds of stress in

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environment are likely to develop both mental and physical disorders.For ,example if I say someone is overworked in the workplace she/he mostly getting the headaches, like where I am working there very mostly are getting the headaches and stomach issues because the

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don't eat healthy bread every day and depend on a fast meal that's why they are facing the health issues in daily life.

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, I very much agree

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should eat healthy meals if they are going to eat unhealthy meals their lifetime

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going to reduce.

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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
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Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

257 words

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The average standard of people’s health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Include an introduction and conclusion

In the future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phones. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do think some people might not be happy to give using cash.

Students should be taught academic knowledge so that they can pass exams, and skills such as cooking or dressing should not be taught. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

More and more people use private motorbikes or cars instead of taking public transport. What are the reasons for this trend? How can the government encourage people to take public transport? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

ome people think that individuals today are more dependent on each other. Others believe people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter: introduce yourself explain what the problem is suggest solutions to the problem