Your company sent you to complete a course in another country. You have lost the certificate received at the end of the course. Write a letter to the principal of the college where you took the course. In your letter, you should tell: how you lost the certificate why you need it now what you want the principal to do.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to apologize regarding an incident that happened at the graduation dinner party. I am Tun Naung Win, who has recently finished a course at your university.

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with, I have to make

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confess it was my recklessness because I did not keep it

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a safe place after the graduation ceremony. By the time of

dinner

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the dinner

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party, I

completely

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had completely

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forgot

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it on the table and had fun times with my

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classmates

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class mates

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, I totally did not remember about it and went back to my country directly. I was wondering if there

any

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chances that you could make it to get a new certificate. Even though I tried to find it everywhere, I did not see it anywhere. I know it was

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hundred

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a hundrad

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percent

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per cent

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my mistake,

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, I have to show it back to my company as

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proof of my

attandance

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attendance

. I would like to know how long

does

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it take to replicate a new one. And I do not mind if there

any

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fines that you want me to pay for my false. Please do not get me wrong, I am aware that money cannot fix any things. I would

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appreciate it if you could help me by any means. I hope you could understand my situation. Yours faithfully, Tun Naung Win

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

225 words

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