You recently went to a concert and thought one of te singers was very good. You want to tell him hoe you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter - say how you feel about his performance -give details of your musical activities -explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

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Dear Linda I have been surprised with your ability in your excellent performance at a concert which was held
last
weekend.
Moreover
, I am writing to ask you for some help. The energetic rhythm that you show makes me feel very motivating. The lively music that you play can make me feel very excited which let me dance with your guidance unconsciously.
For instance
, while you were singing the highlight sentence, you called us to follow you. In
this
way, I can feel that I was involved in the concert deeply.
Hence
, I want to invite you to take part in my musical activities as a special performer. It’s an annual event of my company. Around 500 employees will join in. I will
also
invite other musicians like guitar players and violin players. I want to provide an amazing live music show for my workers. I would like you can attend and arouse the attention of the audience. I hope you can play as the
first
person which can attract every person’s interest.
For example
, you can sing your most famous song The ” beautiful girl” as a former dish. I really expect you can join us. So I am looking forward to receiving your response. Yours faithfully!
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