Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It’s scorhing heat here in Mumbai and I am already awaiting the rainy season. A perfect rainy day for me is to plug in some good music and sit in my balcony, sipping hot cup of coffee and eating hot piping “kanda bhaji” i.e onion fritters. It consists of
onions
, coated in seasoned
Gram
flour
batter and deep fried. Would you like to try out one of Maharashtrian cuisine Kanda bhaji? Prep Time : 11-15 minutes Serve : 4 Level Of Cooking : Easy Taste : Spicy Ingredients for Kanda Bhajia Recipe 1.
Onions
sliced - 3 large 2.
Oil
to deep fry 3.Salt to taste 4.
Gram
flour
(besan) 1 cup 5.Red chilli powder 1 teaspoon Method
Step
1 Slice fresh
onions
thinly and place in a mixing bowl
Step
2 Add
Gram
flour
, red chilli powder to the onion slices and mix. Add Salt as per your taste
Step
3 Add 1 teaspoon of
oil
to
this
mixture
. (The addition of
oil
makes these pakoras crisp and
also
helps in less absorption of
oil
while
frying the bhajis.)
Step
4 Mix everything very well. Allow the
mixture
to rest for 5 to 6 mins as the
onions
would leave moisture. The
mixture
shouldn’t be too dry nor moist. if the
mixture
looks too moist
then
add 1 to 2 teaspoons of
gram
flour
/besan. If dry,
then
allow to rest for a couple of more minutes.
Step
5 Heat sufficient
oil
in a deep pan till very hot. Drop lumps of onion
mixture
into the hot
oil
. If they stick together try to separate them. Flip Bhajiyas a couple of times more and fry them till they become crisp and golden.
Step
4 Drain when they are done. Drain when golden onto an absorbent paper. Serve hot. You can serve lip-smacking Kanda Bhaji with a spicy green chutney or tomato ketchup and a few fried & salted green chilies.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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