You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter describe the item explain where and when you left it say what action you would like the company to take

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am Ravi and writing

this

letter to let you know that I lost my brand new mobile

phone

during my trip. It was in red colour, on the backside of the

phone

, there will be a green colour tag which shows my name and number as well.

Moreover

this

phone

was very close to my heart as

this

was gifted by my parents. On Sunday, in the morning at 9AM, I was going to surrey city to meet one of my friends and I am sure that I had my

phone

with me while boarding the train at Burnaby station, in fact, I had a quick a call from my father at Burnaby parking slot. Due to the holiday season, there was a huge rush on the train and I am sure that I left my

phone

in my seat 28.

Furthermore

, I can bring all relevant documents

such

as Invoice copy and bank statement as proof and I would request you to please check the train inside cameras.

in addition

, It will be good, if we can coordinate with the network provider as they can trace out the

phone

single very quickly. I look forward to hearing an update from you on my request. Yours faithfully, Lakshmi.

Submitted by lakshma999 on Sat May 28 2022

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