Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Railways

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transport

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needs for daily transportation but

roads

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also

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important

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an important

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feature for

eveyone's

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everyone's

travelling. Some people think that governments should invest more money

on

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railways

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instead

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of

roads

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,

however

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, I believe that

railways

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transport

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and

roads

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are fundamental for our living.

Firstly

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,

railways

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is

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more efficient and economical. To elaborate

further

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, railway

transport

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saves our

time

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instead

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of wasting

time

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in congestion of traffic road. We can

travel

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from one place to another within a short period of

time

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.

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, it does not produce exhaust fume so it can not affect the environment and reduce the health problem

of

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people's lives.

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, it

is not operate

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by

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with

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non-renewable energy like fossil fuel.

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, it is not only efficient in our

time

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as well as economical

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environment

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. On contrary,

roads

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are fundamental infrastructure for our living.

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,

roads

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can connect from

farthest

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place to become nearer and can be

accessible

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easily.

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, it

create

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more routes in rural areas as we become easier to

travel

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in a short distance. Unless the

roads

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did not

built

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in rural areas it will take

time

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to

travel

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to reach the destination. To decipher

further

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, the

maintaineance

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maintenance

of

roads

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is

more

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cheaper than the railway

transport

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. If the government do not maintain the road properly, it might face accident frequently. In conclusion, I partially agree with

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notion because

railways

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transport

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is essential for our daily

basic

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and people depend on

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,

on the other hand

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,

roads

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is

fundamental

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a fundamental

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structure for connecting in rural areas to

travel

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efficiently. Despite the

facts

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that government should spend wisely

railways

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transport

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as well as

roads

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as both are important for our daily

transport

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.