Some people feel that the legal age at which people can marry should be at least 21. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued nowadays that
marriage
should be restricted by law Use synonyms
for
adults Change preposition
to
with
the Change preposition
apply
age
of 21 years or older. I totally disagree with Use synonyms
this
notion as limiting the Linking Words
age
will put many promising adolescents' relationships on hold and will decrease the birth ratios as the act of conception will be delayed.
The main reason why I believe that setting a defined Use synonyms
age
of Use synonyms
marriage
at 21 years is harmful is Use synonyms
because
many relationships that start at adolescence will be left on hold. Replace the word
that
In other words
, they will be denied Linking Words
marriage
which is the final step of consolidating a relationship and of preventing its dismantlement. Once married we are admitting Use synonyms
taking
responsibility and starting a family Change preposition
to taking
thus
if retarded you can lose all Linking Words
of
potential marriages and families.
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apply
In addition
, I believe changing the Linking Words
age
of Use synonyms
marriage
can be detrimental to the birth Use synonyms
ratios
. If we delay Fix the agreement mistake
ratio
marriage
Use synonyms
then
we are committing by default to reducing the Linking Words
amount
of babies born each year ; as conception starts at a later stage. Change the quantifier
number
Furthermore
, at 21 people are often more occupied Linking Words
at
either their academic tasks or their professional work. As a consequence, they are less likely to be engaged Change preposition
with
at
finding a partner and forming a family. The end result is a decrease in the population of Change preposition
in
a
nation Remove the article
apply
Correct your spelling
over time
overtime
.
In conclusion, I think limiting the Correct your spelling
over time
age
of Use synonyms
marriage
is a big mistake and never a law Use synonyms
of
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apply
such
should be implemented due to its negative effects on potential successful relationships among adolescents and the average birth ratios of a nation.Linking Words
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