Some people feel that the legal age at which people can marry should be at least 21. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued nowadays that

marriage

should be restricted by law

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adults

with

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the

age

of 21 years or older. I totally disagree with

this

notion as limiting the

age

will put many promising adolescents' relationships on hold and will decrease the birth ratios as the act of conception will be delayed. The main reason why I believe that setting a defined

age

of

marriage

at 21 years is harmful is

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many relationships that start at adolescence will be left on hold.

In other words

, they will be denied

marriage

which is the final step of consolidating a relationship and of preventing its dismantlement. Once married we are admitting

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responsibility and starting a family

thus

if retarded you can lose all

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potential marriages and families.

In addition

, I believe changing the

age

of

marriage

can be detrimental to the birth

ratios

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. If we delay

marriage

then

we are committing by default to reducing the

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of babies born each year ; as conception starts at a later stage.

Furthermore

, at 21 people are often more occupied

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either their academic tasks or their professional work. As a consequence, they are less likely to be engaged

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finding a partner and forming a family. The end result is a decrease in the population of

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nation

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. In conclusion, I think limiting the

age

of

marriage

is a big mistake and never a law

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such

should be implemented due to its negative effects on potential successful relationships among adolescents and the average birth ratios of a nation.