You recently stayed at your friend’s place, to look after the house while he/she is away. You accidentally damaged something in his/her house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: describe what the accident was explain when it happened suggest how the damage can be fixed.

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Dear Jasmeen, I hope you are enjoying your solo Europe trip. I am writing to inform you that there has been an unfortunate fire accident in your flat which has damaged the

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area because of gas leak due to faulty pipeline. Luckily, I am safe as I was not in the

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when the gas pipe burst due to high-pressure today early morning. Though there has been considerable damage to the tiles and

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appliances present in that area, you need not worry about the expenses as it is covered under the guaranteed insurance to be paid by the company in case of any malfunctioning. The society maintenance department has confirmed that

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incident happened due to negligence on the company’s behalf and issued them an order to renovate the entire

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area and pay for the loss of electrical appliances. You need not worry about the renovation as I would oversee it personally and get it completed before your return

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month. Enjoy the rest of your trip and do send me some pictures whenever you can. Yours lovingly, Harman

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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