You recently stayed at your friend’s place, to look after the house while he/she is away. You accidentally damaged something in his/her house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: describe what the accident was explain when it happened suggest how the damage can be fixed.

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Dear Jasmeen, I hope you are enjoying your solo Europe trip. I am writing to inform you that there has been an unfortunate fire accident in your flat which has damaged the

kitchen

area because of gas leak due to faulty pipeline. Luckily, I am safe as I was not in the

kitchen

when the gas pipe burst due to high-pressure today early morning. Though there has been considerable damage to the tiles and

kitchen

appliances present in that area, you need not worry about the expenses as it is covered under the guaranteed insurance to be paid by the company in case of any malfunctioning. The society maintenance department has confirmed that

this

incident happened due to negligence on the company’s behalf and issued them an order to renovate the entire

kitchen

area and pay for the loss of electrical appliances. You need not worry about the renovation as I would oversee it personally and get it completed before your return

month. Enjoy the rest of your trip and do send me some pictures whenever you can. Yours lovingly, Harman

Submitted by mile.jasmeenkaur12 on Sat May 28 2022

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