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Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

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Nowadays the kids demand new
toys
 every now and
then
. Some parents recurringly buy games, while others
refrian
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refrain
 from buying frequently. In
this
 essay, we will decipher
advantages
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the advantages
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 as well as
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disadvantages
disadvantanges
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the disadvantanges
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 of having numerous
toys
. To commence with, a variety
in
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of
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toys
 will build curiosity and skills.
In other words
, children will develop motor skills by handling different objects.
Moreover
, they will have different learnings from
myraid
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myriad
 things.
For instance
, scrabble will assist in building excellent vocabulary, while a cricket bat will help in muscle building. Apart from
this
, the young generation will never face boredom as they will constantly have umpteen playing items.
Thus
,
this
 will keep them occupied and happy.
On the other hand
,
one
 will not have any value when given in abundance.
Although
,
little
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the little
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one
 may keep on asking for different sets, perhaps, might indulge in removing parts of
a
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toys
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toys
 or keep throwing until it's broken.
Furthermore
, they may not express gratitude when given a new
one
 as they seldom get it and not once in a blue moon.
Therefore
, preserving their limited gifts will not be vital, as deep inside they are aware parents would immediately buy
other
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another
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one
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ones
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. Overall,
this
 may have implications
on
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for
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 a child's upbringing. To sum up, while the parents
overwhelm's
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overwhelm
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 a child with
toys
 to make them feel ecstatic and encourage learning abilities, it may
also
 hamper their attitude of having everything, which may have
detrimental
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 effect
in
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on
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 valuing a thing.
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