Today the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. Discuss the causes and suggest solutions.
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people
are sacrificing their standard of living. In recent times, most of the Use synonyms
people
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large cities are leading a low-quality Change preposition
in
life
. In my perspective, the rising population, usage of Use synonyms
technologies
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life
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cities
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cities,
people
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fast pace
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fast-paced
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an
instance, their day-to-day schedule is more of like same, wake up early, go to work Correct article usage
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then
come back late and sleep. In Linking Words
this
situation, they are not able to spend quality time with their family or loved ones. Linking Words
Furthermore
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technologies
that they can only be seen at home rather than playing outside or meeting their friends, Use synonyms
due to
which, they face obesity and laziness. Linking Words
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However
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this
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people
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of
large cities should restrict their usage of Change preposition
in
technologies
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such
as online games and social media apps and hang out more often with their friends and family. Linking Words
Furthermore
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the
environmental pollution, Correct article usage
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be cured, by using, health purifiers at home. Linking Words
In addition
, in my view, the government should restrict the buying of cars in a family as Linking Words
people
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are having
more cars than family members.
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people
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