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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic stability
  • GDP growth
  • Employment rates
  • Living standards
  • Public services
  • Infrastructure development
  • Social progress
  • Healthcare
  • Education
  • Equality
  • Environmental sustainability
  • Political stability
  • Cultural development
  • Long-term well-being
  • Holistic approach
  • Comprehensive growth
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