On a recent holiday you lost a valueable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a lettr to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter

#holiday #valueable #item #travel #insurance #cost #lettr #manager #company

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Dear Sir /Madam, My name is Doris Wong, I am writing

this

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letter to claim

for

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apply

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travel

insurance

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as I have lost my

camera

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recently. I am a

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customer of ABC

insurance

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company

over

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10 years and my customer ID is ABC111111. I lost my SONY

camera

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during a Thailand trip in May 2022. Before the trip, I bought travel

insurance

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, which covers the valuable items under CAD1000. My SONY

camera

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is in white colour and the model is ABC123. As a matter of fact,

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model was just released in April 2022. The amount involved is CAD 500, which fits the claim coverage. My SONY

camera

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was lost when I went to the airport on 05 May 2022. I had the

camera

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put on my suitcase while I was arranging the boarding pass. While I was so busy arranging the procedures at the counter, a stranger came by and took the

camera

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without any notice. After I had got my boarding pass, I found that my

camera

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disappeared. The travel

insurance

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I bought is plan B and I would like to have full reimbursement for my

camera

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cost. Please find the attached receipt of the

camera

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as well as the official lost report provided by the police station at the airport. Should you need any more information and supporting documents for the claim, please contact me at [email protected] or contact number at: 123456. I am looking forward to

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your reply. Yours faithfully, Doris Wong

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

247 words

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