On a recent holiday you lost a valueable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a lettr to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter

#holiday #valueable #item #travel #insurance #cost #lettr #manager #company

Dear Sir /Madam, My name is Doris Wong, I am writing

this

letter to claim

for

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travel

insurance

as I have lost my

camera

recently. I am a

loyalty

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customer of ABC

insurance

company

over

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10 years and my customer ID is ABC111111. I lost my SONY

camera

during a Thailand trip in May 2022. Before the trip, I bought travel

insurance

, which covers the valuable items under CAD1000. My SONY

camera

is in white colour and the model is ABC123. As a matter of fact,

this

model was just released in April 2022. The amount involved is CAD 500, which fits the claim coverage. My SONY

camera

was lost when I went to the airport on 05 May 2022. I had the

camera

put on my suitcase while I was arranging the boarding pass. While I was so busy arranging the procedures at the counter, a stranger came by and took the

camera

without any notice. After I had got my boarding pass, I found that my

camera

disappeared. The travel

insurance

I bought is plan B and I would like to have full reimbursement for my

camera

cost. Please find the attached receipt of the

camera

as well as the official lost report provided by the police station at the airport. Should you need any more information and supporting documents for the claim, please contact me at [email protected] or contact number at: 123456. I am looking forward to

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your reply. Yours faithfully, Doris Wong

Submitted by ABC_XYZ on Sun May 29 2022

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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

247 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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