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You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask yoour manager about it. Writee a lettr to your manager. In your letter explain why you want to take time off work give detail of the amount of time you need suggest how you work could be covered while you are away

#company #time #work #yoour #manager #writee #lettr #detail #amount
Dear Helen, I hope
this
 email
find
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 you well. Hope you having a great time with your lovely family
for
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 your London trip. I would like to get your permission to have 3 hours early leave on 01 May 2019. Our family planned to have
60th
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 birthday party for my father on that day. Most of
relatives
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 will come back to our house to have
wonderful
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 dinner with him. Because
of
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my relatives are
come
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 from overseas, I
need
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 go to
airport
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the airport
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 to pick them up and arrange party details
bit
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a bit
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 early to ensure the party can run smoothly. I had checked my calendar there is no urgent meeting with clients. To make sure our daily
rountine
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routine
 can run smooth, we had gone through some of the daily
rountine
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routine
last
 week, which
was
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ran smoothly and she knew the procedures. In
addtion
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, I will provide an outstanding list to her and go through the list one by one after
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lunchtime
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lunch time
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. I am
confidence
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 that she can pick up my tasks smoothly. If any urgent, she will call my mobile phone.
This
 event is very important for our family. I hope that you can
approval
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 the early leave for me. Thank you for your understanding. Yours faithfully, XXXX
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