You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter * Explain why you changed jobs * describe your new job * tell him/her your other news

Dear John, I hope you are well. We haven't chance to hear any news from each other for a long time. I have big news that I want to share with excitement. As you know, I worked for Akbank for 7 years and was waiting
for getting
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a promotion
as
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a
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apply
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senior vice president.
However
,
top
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management of the bank took a decision
tomhire
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to hire
a manager from another bank. I'm disappointed of
couse
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course
and thought that I lost my
change
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that's why I began seeking
for
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other job
opportinities
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opportunities
. ı didn't want to waste time meanwhile.
First,
I updated my
Linkedin
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LinkedIn
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profile, which HR professionals and head hunters monitor,
then
, reached my business contacts to find out if there were any job vacancies. I had supposed it would take some time
getting
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appropriate
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an appropriate
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job offer but contrary to what I thought
in
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2 weeks, after taking
my
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action,
Denizbank
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the Denizbank
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HR department reached me , inviting me to come in for an interview.
Interview
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went
smooth
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and 2 days after the meeting, I
was requested
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an offer as the group head with satisfying pay and benefits. Now I have
company
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a company
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car so I am able to take you to a picnic especially regardless of distance. At Denizbank, I am
responsiable
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responsible
for
credit
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the credit
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cards
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application process, forging an appropriate relationship
within
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salesforce and
head quarters
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headquarters
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teams. Creating and driving sales
campaings
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campaigns
campaign
is a significant part of my duties.
Everthing
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Everything
is fine outside of work as well. I wish to hear news from you ASAP Take care of
you
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, Mert
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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