You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter * Explain why you changed jobs * describe your new job * tell him/her your other news
Dear John, I hope you are well. We haven't chance to hear any news from each other for a long time. I have big news that I want to share with excitement. As you know, I worked for Akbank for 7 years and was waiting
for getting
a promotion Change preposition
to get
as
Change preposition
to
a
senior vice president. Correct article usage
apply
However
, top
management of the bank took a decision Correct article usage
the top
tomhire
a manager from another bank. I'm disappointed of Correct your spelling
to hire
couse
and thought that I lost my Correct your spelling
course
change
that's why I began seeking Correct your spelling
chance
for
other job Change preposition
apply
opportinities
. ı didn't want to waste time meanwhile. Correct your spelling
opportunities
First,
I updated my Linkedin
profile, which HR professionals and head hunters monitor, Correct your spelling
LinkedIn
then
, reached my business contacts to find out if there were any job vacancies. I had supposed it would take some time getting
Change the verb form
to get
appropriate
job offer but contrary to what I thought Correct article usage
an appropriate
in
2 weeks, after taking Change preposition
apply
my
action, Correct pronoun usage
apply
Denizbank
HR department reached me , inviting me to come in for an interview. Correct article usage
the Denizbank
Interview
went Add an article
The interview
smooth
and 2 days after the meeting, I Change the word
smoothly
was requested
an offer as the group head with satisfying pay and benefits. Now I have Change the verb form
have requested
company
car so I am able to take you to a picnic especially regardless of distance. At Denizbank, I am Add an article
a company
responsiable
for Correct your spelling
responsible
credit
Correct article usage
the credit
cards
application process, forging an appropriate relationship Change the noun form
card
within
salesforce and Change preposition
between
head quarters
teams. Creating and driving sales Correct your spelling
headquarters
campaings
is a significant part of my duties. Correct your spelling
campaigns
campaign
Everthing
is fine outside of work as well. I wish to hear news from you ASAP Take care of Correct your spelling
Everything
you
, MertCorrect pronoun usage
yourself
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.