Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to apply for a new computer course starting at college

month. I am currently doing my

third

-year graduation in the economics department. I have a keen interest in learning computer courses which will be beneficial to my future.

Moreover

, I am from a middle-class family, who cannot afford the course fee mentioned in private classes outside the college. In order to

this

joining the new course beginning in our college will be

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excellent support for me.

Additionally

, I am sorry to inform you that I do not have any elementary knowledge to enrol on the new batch. I am requesting your help to find a way to join the class and it would be appreciatable by sharing the class timings. I am attaching my academic records with

this

request.

Furthermore

, if you require to know anything please do not hesitate to contact to my mobile number +91 6548464247. Yours sincerely Jacob P T

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