our neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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Dear Jane, Good evening, I am writing
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in response to your yesterday's letter about the complaint of noise from my flat. Yesterday was my son's 16th birthday, he was so excited
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his birthday that he invited his few close friends for his birthday party. The youngsters had a rush of adrenaline so they tuned the music loud. I and my husband wanted to give the kids some teenage time so we left home and went to our mother's house for around two hours. I apologize for that event. I realize that was a very bad action and it might have disturbed you and your family a lot. I have
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my son about his action and as he is sixteen now he understood the point so well. He is
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sorry for yesterday's disturbance. Trust me I will make sure
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will not happen again. Love, Your Vandna.
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