You are going to throw a party and would like to cook a special dish for your guests but do not have the recipe. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: tell your friend why you are having a party explain what dish you want to cook and ask your friend for the recipe invite your friend to the party

Dear Dave, How've you been? It's been a long time since we
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met. I'd like to give the good news that I have been promoted to a superior position at my job. So, I'd like to give a celebration party at my house
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some snacks, drinks and special dishes. It was really unbelievable that I
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the senior manager position. Among the dishes, I'd like to try a new special dish, which everyone loves to have,
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as Japanese salmon baking. Unfortunately, I don't have any recipe or ingredient list. I was wondering if you could help me with those things because I know you're really good at it since you're a chef. I'd be grateful if you could come to that party
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I hope you could spare some time with us. It would be around the end of
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month
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I haven't chosen the detailed date yet.
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, let me know what
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your most convenient date to join us
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is, and
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don't be bothered to bring anything else because I'll prepare everything that would
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for the party. Best wishes, Tun Naung Win

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task response
Task response: The letter includes the why of the party, the dish request, and the invite, but some parts are not very clear. Make each part easy to see and ask for the recipe clearly.
coherence and cohesion
Coherence and cohesion: Use clear paragraphs. Put one idea in each paragraph (reason for party, the dish and recipe, the invite). Use simple linking words to move from one idea to the next.
tone
Greeting and closing are in place so the letter feels friendly.
content
The letter shows a kind and warm tone and mentions a real event (promotion).
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