Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

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play a vital role in spreading knowledge and educating

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. A great

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of

museums

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charge

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for admission while others are cost-free. From my point of view, in long run introducing the entry fees for

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has many upsides, even though it has a few downsides. On the one hand, it

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by a crowd that by setting

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fees for galleries a fewer

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of

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will be drawn to

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places that are home to

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historical and cultural heritage of them. In

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case, they will be less familiar with the art, history, and the culture of their home town or even the world.

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, they are likely to spend their budget on trivial pastime activities like shopping or eating,

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.

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claim can be denied, since an individual who is passionate about these artistic places, will definitely visit there frequently whether the admission price is free or not.

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, it would be better to educate and inform

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through different media about the benefits and values these timeless and aesthetic buildings have

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of letting everyone in.

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, imposing an

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fee

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on

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has positive effects on

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. If these monuments set admission fees, a considerable amount of money will be raised for the maintenance and improvement of that

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as cleaning , fixing or painting. Many

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are not able to meet their financial needs and obligations by spending the budget that government gives them annually. In

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a case, improvements of

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,like fixing or repairing- is dependent on the

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clients pay. The

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benefit obligatory

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fee

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brings is limiting the

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of

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each museum.

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, if

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were obliged to pay to enter historical sites, they are less inclined to visit there.

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, by doing

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, not only uninitiated

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and philistines prefer not to stop by in these areas, but

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only the ones who possess

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sense of appreciation for

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brilliance buildings enter them. In

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scenario, these monuments sustain less damage which might be irreparable, and they are preserved well.

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, the entry ticket

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the Louvre Museum is too expensive that only receives 10

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a day, while Momma in New York is cos-free which makes it a popular destination to a vast

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of

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, as is seen, Louvre is kept in a much better situation. To conclude, if

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are asked to pay some money as an

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fee

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to

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, they will be more reluctant to visit these buildings.

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,

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will not be inflicted

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significant harm.

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, some improvements can be taken into account by using

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extra income.