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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #information #research #business #world
It is sometimes argued that
information
 should be shared as much as possible in various areas
such
 as
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scientific
research
,
business
 and the academic world.
However
, some other
people
 oppose that opinion and think that some
information
 should be kept confidential as they are too important and precious. In my opinion, both views are right in their way and we should decide whether specific
information
 should be announced to let everyone know. Some of the
information
 concerned with scientific
research
 and
business
 should be allowed published to let the general public earn knowledge and have benefits. Most of the
research
 works are carried out with the purpose of providing solutions for the difficulties we are facing
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 our daily life.
For example
, the development of some useful theory like a
business
 technique should be shared with other
people
 or at least include in student lectures so that these theories can be used in tackling real
business
 problems and have enormous benefits
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 the whole
business
. Another good thing about educating
people
 about some scientific
research
 is that
people
 would be informed about the things they should prepare or ways they could get help.
For instance
, if
people
 know about a successful invention of drugs to cure certain
disease
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, patients suffering from that disease will be motivated and get mental support with that good news.
However
, some
research
 works are too confidential and contain sensitive contents, so
thus
 it is not necessary to let everyone know about them. An imaginary or realistic
research
 project about aliens’ existence on earth named “the Ärea 51”is being carried out by scientists in America and the exact
information
are
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 still unpublished. No one knows exactly about that project and I personally believe that there have some strong points to
keep
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information
 safe. To conclude, the decision of whether
general
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 public should be shared
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the
information
 about academic work, scientific
research
 and
business
 is really important and should be decided wisely.
This
 is because it is not always beneficial to let everyone know everything about those things.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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