Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time?
there days some parnts their claim for their kids spend a lot of
time
in internet So,some people
thaink that it ueseful fot there mintel herath to take free time
,due to if there take ful time
to work about school
in the end there rultes unsatisfying,While other believe that some childeran when the take free time
there significantely deeply reflected bad results This
essay will discuss both sides and will draw my personal conclusion should the childern spend free time
in technongly or spend time
with there firends nevertheless
in school
there Confrontaion under parisson with the aessement or medterim it essential for them In other hand, furthermore
should the childeran menergment the time
between the school
and they free time
for appropaitely, for a inslace if the parents make schedule 7hour studng and the next
10 hours it free time
for the kids before the sleep,So, thats why some think that the smart people
the do that that why they become geines On the other hand
, why some people
feel that why in there opinion the deeply believe should spends there time
in working more in school
To illustrat, because ole people
they have other points and look for Issue in othe way, hence
the belief that there is a lot of students pression there time
in study and Unfortunately the take loest score In addition
the better solution meneger there time
in planling about there day,This
proves clearly that this
idea, in conclusion , after analysis of both view, I believe that it is make plan and more time
give for studying equailiy 8 hours study 5 hours spend there time
in social meddieh or what there want to do.Submitted by abrar501otb on
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion