Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsary part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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subject should be compulsory for all youngsters. Certainly, I completely agree with this
statement and I will elaborate on my opinion.
To begin
with, wherever charity tasks assist to
adolescents to develop their good qualities in their Change preposition
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life
. For example
, younger people who are willing to do helping others in their life
, always attempt to care about their surroundings and try to improve their noble qualities like optimism, working spirit, caring
for others. Correct word choice
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, it has impacted in a positive manner and attain
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their young age.
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In addition
, youth age learners attain to get others
attention to do these sociable tasks and they flock to assist needy people in their society. Change noun form
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helping
their junior's sports practices and neighbourhoods in their troublesome situations. Wrong verb form
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Consequently
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such
sociable and productive tasks for needy humans.
In conclusion, from my perspective, I believe charity-related subjects should be want to implement as a
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