Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality, high school students should be encouraged to question and offer criticisms on their teachers. Others think this will lead to a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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The
quality
of education
, nowadays, has improved due to the invention of the feedback
system. While there are people who believe that asking questions and criticising teachers
will improve the quality
of education
, I am of the opinion that this
will reduce the value for teachers
and respect towards them for several reasons
.
On the one hand, it could be argued that the quality
of education
improves due to constant questioning and criticism
. One of the reasons
I feel is the increase
in students
' intellect. While there are many students
who avoid asking questions to their teachers
, there are others who use this
tactic to increase
their knowledge of the subject
. For example
, it is known to many that asking doubts helps students
increase
their knowledge of the subject
, and also
helps in clearing the confusion in their minds. Eventually, this
will help children get success in their examinations and in their future careers. The other and the most important reason is that teaching-related feedback
helps in improving the way the subject
is taught. As teachers
spend most of their time teaching a particular subject
, it is very important for them to know what qualities they lack and how can they improve. Furthermore
, feedback
every now and then
from students
can help them learn tactics to teach and improve their teaching ability. Therefore
, each and every teacher can eventually improve the quality
of education
in high school.
On the other hand
, I side with those who believe that expressing concerns and dissatisfaction related to studies can lead to several problems. Firstly
, I feel that this
can lead to improper behaviour
among students
. Although
there are many who say that offering criticism
can improve the quality
of the subject
being taught due to the improved feedback
system, I believe that this
can lead to misbehaviour and a lack of respect towards the teacher. In addition
to it, there are times when such
improper behaviour
can hamper students
' progress due to disbelief towards their teacher, consequently
, spoiling them and their future. However
, the most important reason is the reduction in motivation to teach. Even though feedback
from students
can sometimes help teachers
improve themselves, harsh criticism
can lead to a decrease in motivation to teach. Many teachers
take it to the heart if anyone criticizes them. As a result
, this
can cause breakdown and make them take extreme steps such
as leaving their high school job or at worst can cause them mental damage. Therefore
, kind words and respectful behaviour
should always be taken into consideration by students
while talking to their guide.
Most importantly, respectful language and a proper tone can also
help students
become good human beings.
To conclude, While there are reasons
to believe that the criticism
and questions can improve the education
quality
such
as an improvement in students
' intellect as well as the improvement in teaching quality
due to feedback
, there are also
reasons
to avoid doing it such
as a decrease in motivation to teach and an increase
in improper and disrespectful behaviour
of students
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