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Immigration has a huge impact on the society. What are the main causes of immigration? What are its effects?

#immigration #impact #society #effects
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There is no doubt that these days, well,
immigration
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it
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imporve
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improve
 now from 2022 to 2030 will
develobe
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develop
developed
. With
technology
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 the world
becomse
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becomes
become
 more in more improving,
such
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it
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is improving every year by technology. The question is what are the major
reason
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of
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immigration
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. has a huge effect on the community? in
this
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discuss
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 my opinion. In term of
positive
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 side of
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, I believe
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good
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 idea about
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country
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Palstinia
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Palestinian
 there many
of
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people
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immigration
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 to Canada,
britania
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, to work and makes
them
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life
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 and gained money. The main reason given to support
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is
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his
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 claim is that regarding
to
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immigration
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, another
country
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 is
immigration
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 is Ukrania there a lot of
people
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immigration
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 to
near
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country
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. To illustrate between Russia and Ukrania there is war so
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everybody
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every body
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everybody
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dieded
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decided
died
 in Ukrania.
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However
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 the
problems
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problem
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 is when countries
accepts
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 their
people
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 the
country
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 will suffer from these
people
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made
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 them houses and
give
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giving
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 them
foods
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. to sum up.
Alouthg
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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