You recently stayed at your friend’s place, to look after the house while he/she is away. You accidentally damaged something in his/her house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: describe what the accident was explain when it happened suggest how the damage can be fixed.

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Dear John, I am glad to hear that you had a great vacation. During your trip, it was my pleasure to look after your residence.

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, I would like to convey my

apologise

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for breaking your keyboard, that situation was out of my control. The

last

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Monday, While I was working on your desktop all of a sudden your cat jumped on my hand from nowhere due to which I dropped the keyboard to the floor.

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, some keys are

seperated

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separated

from the mainboard and a few keys are totally smashed.

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, To compensate, I have placed an online order for a new wireless keyboard and a mouse which will be delivered to your address by end of the day tomorrow. Please be available at your nest to collect a courier or keep me posted if you are away so that I could change the delivery date. Hopefully, you like a new product!. See you soon!. Yours Lovingly, Johny

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

161 words

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