You recently stayed at your friend’s place, to look after the house while he/she is away. You accidentally damaged something in his/her house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: describe what the accident was explain when it happened suggest how the damage can be fixed.

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Dear John, I am glad to hear that you had a great vacation. During your trip, it was my pleasure to look after your residence.

However

, I would like to convey my

apologise

Replace the word

apologies

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for breaking your keyboard, that situation was out of my control. The

last

Monday, While I was working on your desktop all of a sudden your cat jumped on my hand from nowhere due to which I dropped the keyboard to the floor.

As a result

, some keys are

seperated

Correct your spelling

separated

from the mainboard and a few keys are totally smashed.

Nevertheless

, To compensate, I have placed an online order for a new wireless keyboard and a mouse which will be delivered to your address by end of the day tomorrow. Please be available at your nest to collect a courier or keep me posted if you are away so that I could change the delivery date. Hopefully, you like a new product!. See you soon!. Yours Lovingly, Johny

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