There is no doubt that the number of 
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  engaging in hobbies with electronic devices worldwide incredibly rocketed. Certain individuals think that it offers merits to their 
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 . Others state that hobbies which are without technology are the best way to engage. In my opinion, 
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   essay explores the pros and cons of both statements.
On the one hand, an increasing number of adults are downloading programs on their own 
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  excessively. 
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  access what they most convenient. 
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  some individuals play computer games excessively, even though they enjoy those activities
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  simultaneously, 
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  in one place leads to isolating themselves without social interaction face to face. It only requires 
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  online facilities. 
, youngsters develop some mental health issues 
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Another major issue is that when young children are addicted to their electronic devices, they simultaneously
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  ignore their studies. 
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  and seeking what will happen to the next episode for their favourite characters in the film or to win the game. 
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  , they continue watching the next parts and only waste hours and hours unnecessarily. The child who does 
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  he goes next day to school without homework 
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  he can be absent many days
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  , it automatically gives lower scores 
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 doing 
 using some type of technology, he entertains them in his room alone at the same time, he misses the chance to interact with his family. For 
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  watching movies might be refused to go out for even an important family gathering. As an example, teenagers can 
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  valuable family moments and resulting in a drop in the connection with siblings and parents.
, when someone does physical activities as a hobby that it develops a proper social unique network 
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  in mental relaxation, which 
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  announced
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  that the year 2022 reduced the amount of cardiovascular disease soon after starting gyms 
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  pandemic. Another positive point is that those who participate in regular activities 
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  sleep without any disturbances 
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  to be fresh the next day. 
 is because of the refreshment of the hormonal system in the body. To illustrate, sporty adults do exercise regularly 
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  most of them are healthier.     
  
In conclusion, 
 these days, people are entering to do hobbies differently from the past decades, now, vastly they are playing on their gadgets and it is offering many health issues in lives, 
, that children isolate themselves and it generates to end with educational problems which will affect their future and away from their family bond, but it is very important to consider into account when it comes to physically.