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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to Work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

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In the modern era, some
people
starting
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 their own
business
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businesses
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 rather than
working
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 for a company or organization.
This
 is because they have disappointed a long hour working time and get a low salary so they decided to
work
 as an
entreprenur
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entrepreneur
entrepreneurs
.
However
, there are some demerits point to consider as a self-employed. In
this
 essay, I will discuss
about
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this
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 drawbacks in
details
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.
To begin
 with, there are
myraid
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myriad
 reasons behind
such
 scenario. The
first
 and
prominent
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 one is that
people
 have worked a long
hour
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hours
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 and they didn't spend enough time with their family and friend. To elaborate
further
, nowadays,
people
 spend
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two fold
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 of their time at the office even
a
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holiday they didn't relax properly at their home.
In other words
, due to
long
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hour
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 working, they become depressed
and
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which
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 affect their mental health problems.
Secondly
,
although
 they
work
 many hours at their
work
, they didn't
received
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 a high salary
as a result
 they decided to quit their current organization and start their own
business
.
However
, there are some disadvantages
for
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 being
as
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a
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self-employed. Financial
mangement
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management
 is
the
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one of the main concerns.
Although
 many
people
 are more
sophiscated
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sophisticated
 to start their own
business
, they often lack the
knowlege
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knowledge
 of how to manage their budget. In conclusion,
although
 we
work
 for a company
have
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 a lot of stress and struggle, if we want to start our
business
, we will need to consider financial management and must
be understand
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 the job
situations
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-employed
  • company
  • organization
  • freedom
  • independence
  • income potential
  • flexibility
  • working hours
  • working location
  • passions
  • interests
  • decision-making
  • business practices
  • disadvantages
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