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many animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in the sea. What are the reasons and solutions?

#species #activities #land #sea
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It has been universally acknowledged that the trouble of species quenching is escalating at an alarming rate in the modern age owing to mankind's actions.
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 problem has been of a depressing magnitude.
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 a plethora of causes is there yet some sensible rectifications are
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 available to curb
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 grave concern in the forthcoming paragraphs. Commencing with the causes which are responsible for its growth of it. The
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 and foremost is the level of pollution owing to extensive transportation on the road which emitting co2.
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 to
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, the rapid deforestation for massive population accommodation is the prominent issue and ultimately destructing the natural habitat of the natural species
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 birds and mammals dying out exclusively.
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, A global report indicated that owing to the elevation of the population in the world each year 20% of forests are cut down to the room for the nations and some animals are nearer to extinction. In order to solve
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 serious issue, some measures can be taken,
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 education is the prime source to curb the issue by stimulating To recapitulate, unquestionably,
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 problem has become a burning question of the day.
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, it is not an easy task to solve
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. Government and people should come forward to mitigate
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 complex controversy and the aforementioned suggestions.
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