Some students take one year off between finishing high school and going to university, in order to travel or work. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages.
The majority of students take
an
year Change the article
a
gap
between school and university enrollment for leisure or work. Use synonyms
Although
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this
makes them in Linking Words
lazy
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the lazy
a lazy
situation
, I believe Fix the agreement mistake
situations
benefits
outweigh Correct article usage
the benefits
drawbacks
because it provides Correct article usage
the drawbacks
with
gaining practical experience and financial independence.
One benefit is that students receive extensive knowledge of practical exposure while Correct pronoun usage
them with
on
work. Change preposition
at
This
is because most of the classrooms are not equipped with Linking Words
necessary
skills to cater Correct article usage
the necessary
the
Change preposition
for the
job
requirement after Use synonyms
studies
. Use synonyms
Additionally
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by
taking a sabbatical leave Change preposition
apply
provide
the learners with Add the particle
to provide
self sufficient
funds available for higher Add a hyphen
self-sufficient
studies
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, they get the financial freedom for their daily expenses and prepare them in managing the monthly budget effectively. Linking Words
For example
, in Linking Words
UK
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the UK
among
Change preposition
apply
Correct article usage
the adolescents
adolescents
Change the noun form
adolescent
group
they prefer to work after high school learning which gives them enormous Add a comma
,group
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funds
fund raised
for their territory education.
Correct your spelling
fundraised
However
, the discontinuation of learning Linking Words
habit
makes Fix the agreement mistake
habits
the
teenagers in a lethargic mode of mind. Correct article usage
apply
Although
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this
state of situation brings more difficult similarities in preparing them for the Linking Words
worforce
competition. Correct your spelling
workforce
Furthermore
, Linking Words
lack
of knowledge Correct article usage
a lack
gap
in study puts them in mental stress to cope with the assignment and exam pressure on the go. Use synonyms
Also
, the fear of failure in exams Linking Words
pretend
to continue with the Change the verb form
pretends
job
as a source of income for necessary expenses. Use synonyms
For example
, in Japan teenagers Linking Words
whom
took study Change the pronoun
who
gap
joined Use synonyms
in as
Change preposition
apply
a
labour force in Correct article usage
the
shipping
industries tend to receive Correct article usage
the shipping
on
Change preposition
apply
job
training than their counterparts who continue with higher Use synonyms
studies
.
To conclude, a number of students prefer to take a Use synonyms
gap
year between school and graduation. Use synonyms
However
, the benefits of having necessary Linking Words
job
skill training experience and better financial accountability in life Use synonyms
outweighs
the drawbacks of disruption of Correct subject-verb agreement
outweigh
studies
that creates laziness.Use synonyms
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