Fresh water has always been a limited resource in some nations of the world. Today, however, growing global demand has turned this problem into a global one. What are the causes behind the increased demand and what steps can goverments and individuals take to address this problem?

Naturalwater
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Natural water
has been
limited
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resource in
modern
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world. Nowadays
that is
one of the serious problems regarding not only our
life
but lifestyle our planet too. There are several reasons and solutions to solve
this
issue. Today’s world is watching a sharp increase in the populace.
Also
, science and technology are developing and demand a whopping expense of fluid .
First
of all, the
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of the population to leads a vast
use
of freshwater. Each has been
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drink
drinking
two or three
liters
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of
water
every day. For one-day humanity uses of
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litters of natural liquid.
Secondly
, the
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amount
and quality of technologies repeatedly develop.
For example
, a large proportion of power stations are working with spending a massive per cent of
water
.
Also
, folk drain rivers, lakes, and seas for different targets.
For instance
, farmers
use
that for
water
plants. For
this
reason, humans should
use
rainwater and don’t spend a lot of running
water
.
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, governments ought to bring out a law, which will prohibit
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fluid more
then
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a certain amount.
In addition
, scientists must invent apparatus, which will
use
stormwater to decrease the needs of citizens.
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, in Singapore is used
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and rainwater
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only for the population but for
another purpose
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too. Freshwater is one of the necessary components for
life
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the life
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of our area’s
life
. Has been losing sources of
nativewater
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native water
, will be influenced of future generation and our manner of
life
. In
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,
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I discussed different points of view about
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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