Write a letter to the transport officer about a problem with transport system in your area. Explain in letter . -describe the situation you are facing -why you consider it a problem -what changes you like to recommend

Dear Sir, I am Harry, a resident of William Street Colony, Brisbane. I am writing

this

letter to draw your attention

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a problem with the transportation system

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our area. At the onset, the majority of the people in my area are working and they use

buses

to commute to their workplace.

However

, there are only two

buses

allotted in our area. At the peak times, about 125 passengers travel in a bus with

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capacity of 80 people.

Moreover

, the condition of these

buses

is miserable which makes the situation more painful and can even lead to accidents.

Hence

, I would like to recommend some changes to the existing bus transportation system so that people can travel safely. Primarily, if the repair of current

buses

is possible, it can decrease the chances of mishappenings.

In addition

, there is a need for two more

buses

especially, in

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morning and late evening to decrease the overload of passengers. I hope you will consider the genuinity of the situation and will act

accordingly

. Look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Faithfully, Harry Brown